Life After Death.

Where do you think you’re gonna go when you die?

Do you think you’ll go to those pearly whit gates in the sky?

Or go to the underworld where the sinners thrive,

Or maybe sleep in limbo where lost souls trapped in till the end of time?

Do you want your shell of body,

To be stuck in a box,

In a lot next to decomposing shells,

Who met their end as well?

Or have your body burned,

And thrown into a lake,

Like the others,

Who met a more tragic fate,

Do you think you’ll dance in the stars,

Who a lover who passed early on?

Or sit on the moon with the Goddess,

And her rabbit who makes elixir for the Gods?

I always wonder,

What could be at the end of this road?

If I’ll see the stars,

Or live in a dark abode.

~a sleepy ghost~

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One thought on “Life After Death.

  1. Great stuff! Great thoughts and ideas I have but one problem and that is with this part, for the sake of constructive criticism : Who a lover who passed early on? I think the sentence you want to express is: with a lover who passed early on. Voilà! Hope it helps! You have a lot of talent so keep on writing and don’t hesitate to leave some constructive feedback on my posts as well. We can help each other grow as writers and poets. We are not a large community so we must depend on each other 🙂 .

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